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This is the opening segment from FIVE NICKELS, a one act play that makes up the first act of a full

evening of theatre entitled FIVE NICKELS. Make sense?

 

            FIVE NICKELS

                                   This is the skeletal representation of
                                   the foyer of a Catholic Church. There
                                   is a standing pew rent box, centrally
                                   located, and perhaps a chair or two, or
                                   a bench. There is a scantily stocked
                                   broom closet, which holds a stack of
                                   collection plates. Perched somewhere is
                                   a small portable radio. The room is
                                   incidental to the people. An elaborate
                                   design is not necessary. There are few
                                   separate entrances to this place, a
                                   couple from the church, one from the
                                   outside, but they are used minimally,
                                   and can be representational.

                                   It is around 1990. It is 10:45 a.m. on
                                   a Sunday morning in October. Ed
                                   Maloney, 60, stands at the pew red box,
                                   bending to remove a money pouch from
                                   one of the drawers. He shakes the
                                   pouch, places it on the rostrum. He
                                   then removes a few coins from his
                                   pocket, and tosses the coins into the
                                   pouch with the rest of the change, one
                                   at a time.

                                   ED
            Hmm...

                                   He closes the pouch, ties it, and
                                   exits, with some agitation, into the
                                   church. As he does, Katharine Barber,
                                   age 50, enters from a different church
                                   door. She surveys the room a moment,
                                   approaches the pew rent rostrum, and
                                   inspects it. Ed re-enters from behind.

                                   ED (CONT'D)
            Hey!

                                   CATHERINE
                          (turning to him, startled)
            Holy ...

                                   ED
            Katie...

                                   CATHERINE
                          (a very loud whisper; unable to
                           contain this)
            Shit!

                                   ED
            Ssh!  Ssh!
                          (looks back into the church)

                                   CATHERINE
            You scared the...daylights out of me, Ed!

                                   ED
                          (still sweating)
            Daylights is good. Daylights is OK. You can say daylights.

                                   CATHERINE
            You came from nowhere.

                                   ED
            I thought everybody was gone.

                                   CATHERINE
            I came out the other door.  I finished a rosary after Mass.

                                   ED
            Always a good idea not to leave your beads dangling.

                                   CATHERINE
            Right.

                                   ED
            So to speak.

                                   An awkward pause.  Ed goes to the broom
                                   closet, removes a broom, and absently
                                   begins policing the area.

                                   ED (CONT'D)
            Excuse me.

                                   CATHERINE
            Am I in the way?

                                   ED
            Stay in one place.  I'll sweep around you.
                          (he does)

                                   CATHERINE
                          (after another beat)
            Good sermon.

                                   ED
            Was it?

                                   CATHERINE
            You didn't hear it?

                                   ED
            Well, I listen to the sermon at the seven.  Stay out here for
            the rest of 'em.  If I listen to more than one sermon a week,
            I get to feelin'...

                                   CATHERINE
            What?

                                   ED
            I don't know...Protestant.

                                   CATHERINE
            Ah.

                                   ED
            Not much to listen to these days.  For my money.  The priests
            now, they don't tell you what you should do and what you
            shouldn't do.  They tell you what you do and how come you do
            it and why it's all right so long as you don't do it in front
            of somebody else.  McDermott's the only one who still has
            something to say up there, but the young people don't pay any
            attention to him.  He had the seven today.

                                   CATHERINE
            Did he talk?

                                   ED
            Yes, he did.

                                   CATHERINE
            What about?

                                   ED
                          (beat)
            Jeez, I don't remember.  But whatever it was, it had meat to
            it, I'll tell you that.  'Scuse me.
                          (he points to where Catherine
                           is standing)
            I can get that now.

                                   CATHERINE
                          (moves)
            Oh, sure.
                          (he sweeps the spot)
            I was sorry to hear about Tommy.

                                   ED
            O'Connor.  Yes.  Yes.  A good friend.

                                   CATHERINE
            How's he doing?

                                   ED
            Coming along, I guess.  Can't tell with the ticker.  It was a
            big one.  As big as...well, you know.

                                   CATHERINE
            I didn't know it was as bad as Charlie's.

                                   ED
            God rest 'im.

                                   CATHERINE
                          (beat)
            How's Mary?

                                   ED
            Fine.  I imagine.  Fine.

                                   He takes another, larger bag out of the
                                   pew rent box and empties the contents
                                   of the pouch into it.

                                   CATHERINE
            I always liked Mary.

                                   ED
                          (with inexplicable humor)
            I always liked Mary, too.
                          (changing the subject)
            Where's Mike today?

                                   CATHERINE
            Oh.  He's home.  Getting breakfast.

                                   ED
            He's generally with you.

                                   CATHERINE
            He was here yesterday.  At the four.  You know teenagers. 
            Get it over with.  I'm lucky I can get him to church at all.

                                   ED
            Ah.  I never go near the Saturday Masses.

                                   CATHERINE
            No?

                                   ED
            Goin' to Mass on Saturday is like takin' a shower instead of
            a bath.  You're gettin' rid of the same dirt, but you're
            losin' it too fast.  You need to soak in your own dirt as
            long as you can so that when it's gone you won't be so quick
            to jump back in the mud.

                                   CATHERINE
            A lot of people go to Mass on Saturday.

                                   ED
            There's a lot of muddy people in the world, Catherine.

                                   CATHERINE
            My husband didn't care much for the Saturday Masses, either.

                                   ED
                          (a little uncomfortably)
            No.  No, he didn't.

                                   CATHERINE
            He did enjoy the occasional shower, though.

                                   ED
                          (puts broom away)
            Well, that's it.  All through till the twelve.

                                   CATHERINE
                          (beat)
            Yes.

                                   ED
                          (likewise)
            Yes.
                          (beat)
            Guess I'll be...goin' home.  Sit for an hour.

                                   CATHERINE
                          (a mild affirmation)
            Hm. Hmm.
                          (beat)
            Sit.

                                   ED
            Sit.  Yes.
                          (beat)
            For an hour.
                          (beat)
            I gotta do the...usher...the twelve, too, you know.

                                   CATHERINE
            Oh, I know.  I know.
                          (beat)
            Well...

                                   ED
                          (beat)
            Somethin'...on your mind, Katie?

                                   CATHERINE
                          (suddenly alert)
            There!  See!

                                   ED
            What?

                                   CATHERINE
            You did it again.

                                   ED
            What did I do again?

                                   CATHERINE
            You called me Katie.

                                   ED
            That's your name, isn't it?

                                   CATHERINE
            Everybody else in the world calls me Catherine.  You call me
            Katie.

                                   ED
            Ah...I didn't know it was an issue.

                                   CATHERINE
            Well...it's not an issue.

                                   ED
            Because I can call you Catherine.

                                   CATHERINE
            No, that's...

                                   ED
            One more syllable's not gonna kill me.

                                   CATHERINE
                          (resolutely)
            No.  Call me Katie.
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